Linglo PTE
#32

Challenging Life

Prompt

It is harder for children to grow up in the 21st century than it was in the past. How far do you agree with this statement? Give your opinions.

해석

21세기에 아이들이 성장하는 것이 과거보다 더 어렵다. 이 진술에 어느 정도 동의하는가? 의견을 제시하시오.

Essay Guide

1Topic Expressions

children's upbringing in the 21st centurythe challenges of growing up in modern timesthe experience of childhood todaythe difficulties faced by children in the current centurythe process of growing up in contemporary societythe conditions of childhood in the 21st century

2Opinion Statements

  • I strongly agree that it is harder for children to grow up in the 21st century than in the past.
  • In my opinion, children face more challenges growing up today compared to previous generations.
  • From my perspective, the difficulties of childhood have increased significantly in modern times.

3Supporting Ideas

1. Children today face more pressure from academic and social expectations than in the past.
2. The rise of digital technology and social media has created new challenges for children's mental health.
3. Modern children often experience less outdoor play and face more sedentary lifestyles.
4. Economic and environmental uncertainties make the future less predictable for children growing up now.

4Example Sentences

  • For example, a 2019 study by the American Psychological Association found that teenagers report higher stress levels due to school and social media compared to previous decades.
  • For instance, excessive use of smartphones and social media platforms like Instagram has been linked to increased anxiety and depression among young people.
  • For example, many children in urban areas spend less time playing outside because of safety concerns and busy schedules.
  • For instance, the COVID-19 pandemic caused disruptions in education and family life, adding to the difficulties children face today.

5Essay Structure

IntroductionIntroduce the topic by paraphrasing the prompt and clearly state your opinion on whether growing up is harder now than in the past.
Body 1Discuss the increased pressures and challenges children face today, such as academic demands and social expectations.
Body 2Explain the impact of technology and environmental or economic uncertainties on children's lives and development.
ConclusionSummarize your main points and restate your opinion, emphasizing the reasons why growing up is more difficult in the 21st century.